雅思考试|雅思写作开头段常用思路(1)

雅思写作开头段常用思路

1．介绍目前背景、现象、形势+说源于己的看法
例1：
As the competition for college education becomes severe, more and more parents begin to pay special attention to their childrens early education. As a result, kindergarten children are forced to learn foreign languages, and primary school children gasp^{1 under the burden of heavy homework and endless classes. In my opinion, playing for young children is more important because they can learn about society and nature through playing and they can build up a strong body.}

例2：
Zoos have come a long way from their grim^{2 beginnings. once full of tiny cement-block cages lined with steel bars, the larger zoos now boast simulated3 jungles, veldts, steppes, and rain forests, all in an attempt to replicate4 the animals natural habitat. The attempt is admirable, but its not enough. No amount of replication, no matter how convincing, is enough to make up for denying these creatures their freedom.}