雅思写作怎么样拿高分?不少雅考虑生在作文上丢了不少分,雅思写作怎么样拿高分呢?下面是记者收拾的有关内容,欢迎阅读!
雅思写作高分方法
大家都了解雅思写作分为两个部分:TASK1 和 TASK2。TASK1需要在20分钟内完成,TASK2需要在40分钟内完成。下面就TASK2部分进行分析,找到其提升方法。
第一看到一个写作题目,要对其进行剖析,以确保其写作方向。千万不要写跑题了,或者背离文章的主题思想。这是雅思写作的第一步。
例 如:Some parents in the United Kingdom decide not to have a television intheir home. They believe that, by doing this, their children will spend theleisure time more creatively. To what extent do you agree or disagree with thisdecision?当遇见如此一个题目的时候,大家应该先剖析,然后确定我们的写作方向,是agree,disagree还是要二者兼顾。一般就是从这三方面来写,而不要把重点放到其他的地方。
通常来讲,雅思文章的结构一般就是:第一段:现象句+考试试题改写+本人立场,第二段:论证一,第三段: 论证 二 第四段: 论证三, 第五段:总结段。
这种写法与以前大家传统的议论文的写法几乎相同。在论证的过程中要做到论证的有理有据,内容要有深度,而非浅显的毫无说服力的文字。这是文章得高分得重点之一。
比如如此一句话,讲出就没任何意义:I like Hollywood movies because I like them. 相反,假如换个说法:I like Hollywood movies because its comedies attract me most. 如此讲出才有意义。一般在写文章得时候可以把考生分成两类,一类是遇见了一篇自己很了解的题目,写起来便滔滔不绝了,一发而不可收,控制不了自己。
另一类则是无话可说,该说的话没的有讲出。大家可以把作文的需要量化到每个段落:一篇200词左右的作文一般不会超越15句话,把这15句话依据题目需要分配到各段中去,每一段大概只说那样几句话,绝不多说。
事实上总是是说得越多,错误越多。因此,跟着提纲走,每一段不要写得太多,点到为止,见好就收,这才是最稳妥的对策。考生在平常的训练中可以练习自己迅速列出提纲得能力,这是一个事半功倍得好办法,不仅能够助你整理自己得写作思路,还可以练习你的迅速反映能力。最主要的是提纲可以助你明确的把握文章的脉络,对于写作分数的提升非常有帮助。
在雅思写作中语言和句式的巧妙运用也可以为文章增色不少。 在写作时用简单的语言把复杂的意思表达出来可谓是伟大之举。
对于一个一时找不着词的定义,应该用一种迂回曲折的方法把意思表达了解。或用一个短语,或用一个从句,或三言两语,只须没出什么语言错误。雅思写作中有三个捷径,可以使文章更容易获得高分。
他们是:倒装句,插入语,强调句。假如文章中出现几处如此的句子,相信考官对你的写作水平是会另眼相看的。如果文章看起来愈加活泼,单一的陈述句是不够的,可以适合的穿插一些“修辞问句”,如此的文章看起来会愈加灵动。
比如:Firstly, in order to know itself better, a country needs to remember thepast. “Why we have these traditions? Why our culture and lifestyle are differentfrom other countries?” Those questions about us can only be answered by thehistory of the country. In addition, from the past, we can also learn lots ofthings. As old person always says “the past just like a mirror which can help usdo better in the future”. Indeed, from the failures and successes in the past,we can seek reasons, thus can avoid making similar mistakes.
句子 “Why we have these traditions? Why our culture and lifestyle aredifferent from other countries?” 放在这一段落中是否看起来愈加活泼了。
总之,熟知雅思写作的出题思路,把握雅思的出题方向,学会雅思的写作方法,那样高分将悄然而至。
雅思作文告诉你十招得高分
1、句子不完整
在口语中,交际双方可借用手势语气上下文等,不完整的句子完全可以被理解。可是书面语就不同了,句子结构不完整会令意思表达不清,这样的情况常常在主句写完将来,作者又想加些补充说明时发生。
譬如:There are many ways to know the society. For example by TV, radio, newspaper and so on.
剖析:本句后半部分"For example by TV, radio, newspaper and so on.”不是一个完整的句子,仅为一些不连贯的词汇,不可以独立成句。
改为:There are many ways to know society, for example, by TV, radio, and newspaper.
2、不同
所谓不同不光指主谓不同,还包含了数的不同、时态不同与代词不同等。
譬如:When one have money, he can do what he want to.
剖析:one是第三人称单数,因此本句的have应改为has; want应改为wants, 本句是典型的主谓不同。
改为:When one has money, he can do what he wants .
3、修饰语错位
英语与汉语不同,同一个修饰语置于句子不一样的地方,句子的意思可能引起变化。对于这一点考生们总是没引起足够的看重,因而导致了非必须的误解。
譬如:
I believe I can do it well and I will better know the world outside the campus.
剖析:better地方不当,应置于句末。
4、悬垂修饰语
所谓悬垂修饰语是指句首的短语与后面句子的逻辑关系混乱不清。
譬如:At the age of ten, my grandfather died. 这句中"at the age of ten"只写出十岁时,但没说明“哪个”十岁时,按一般推理不可能是my grandfather, 假如大家把这个悬垂修饰语改得明确一点,读者或考官在读句子时就不会误解了。
改为:When I was ten, my grandfather died.
5、词性误用
“词性误用”常表现为:介词当动词用;形容词当副词用;名词当动词用等。
譬如:None can negative the importance of money.
剖析:negative系形容词,误作动词。
改为:None can deny the importance of money.
6、措词问题
学生在写作中没培养好的推敲,斟酌句子中所使用词的习惯。大多数考生随性,拿来就用,所以作文中用词不当的错误随处可见。
譬如:The increasing use of chemical obstacles in agriculture also makes pollution.
剖析:显然,考生把obstacles“障碍”,“障碍物”误作substance“物质”了。另外“the increasing use”应改为“abusive use”。
改为:The abusive use of chemical substances in agriculture also causes/leads to pollution.
7、指代不清
指代不清主要讲的是代词与被指代的人或物关系不清,或者先后所用的代词不同。
譬如:Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted her to be her bridesmaid.
读完上面这一句话,读者没办法明确地判断两位女孩中哪个将结婚,哪个将当伴娘。假如大家把易于引起误解的代词所指代的对象加以明确,意思就一清二楚了。这个句子可改为:
Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted my sister to be her bridesmaid.
8、不间断句子
这个错误的出现受中文意识的影响非常大。不少考生在写句子时,句子之间缺少有效的连接成分。甚至,有些句子写的比较中式化。
譬如:There are many ways we get to know the outside world.
剖析:这个句子包括了两层完整的意思:“there are many ways”与“we get to know the outside world”。简单地把它们连在一块就不妥当了。
改为:
There are many ways for us to learn about the outside world. 或:
There are many ways through which we can become acquainted with the outside world.
9、累赘
写句子没一个多余的词;写段落没一个无必要的句子。可以用单词的不需要词组;可以用词组的不需要从句或句子。
譬如:In spite of the fact that he is lazy, I like him.
本句的“the fact that he is lazy”系同谓语从句,大家根据上述“可以用词组的不需要从句”可以改为:In spite of his laziness, I like him.
譬如:For the people who are diligent and kind, money is just the thing to be used to buy the thing they need.
整个句子可以大大简化为:
Diligent people use money only to buy what they need.
10、不连贯
不连贯是指一个句子前言不对后语,或是结构上不畅通,这也是考生常犯的问题。
譬如:The fresh water, it is the most important things of the earth.
剖析:the fresh water与逗号后的it不连贯,it与things在数方面不同。
雅思写作高分方法
1. 定义的错误
在写作中,有类词汇表面上看上去乎是对的,但事实上却没表达出你想要表达的意思,有时恰恰事与愿违。用这种词汇写成的英语句子常常引起误解。
① When we go into society after graduation, we will encounter many difficulties.
When we start to work after graduation, we will encounter many difficulties.
“go into society”没汉语“进入社会”的意思。在西方,它是指一个人到肯定的年龄可以开始社会交往,如结交异性朋友,进入某些社交或公共场合等。而汉语“进入社会”一般指学生中学或大学毕业后参加工作。
② Left alone in the jungle at night ,she felt very dangerous.
Left alone in the jungle at night, she felt t hat she was in great danger.
“dangerous”与作者要表达的意思完全相反。说某人dangerous,事实上是说他在某一方面对某人构成危胁,而不是处于危险的境地。这个词用错,意思就完全变了。原意是“她”感到处于危险中。
2、搭配不当
用词搭配是国内学生学习英语最感棘手的地方,在雅思写作中,这种错误也是常常出现的,所以期望大伙引起看重,由于中文里的某些词汇在不一样的语境里,英语有不一样的说法,而这类说法是约定俗成的,完全是习惯使用方法所致,大家稍有不慎,便会犯了错误。现举一些考生在考试中常犯的错误:
① At college, we should learn as much knowledge as possible so t hat we can be well prepared for our future career.
At college, we should acquire as much knowledge as possible so t hat we can be well prepared for our future career.
“学习常识”是学生写作时常常用到的词组,但不少学生都写成learn knowledge,事实上knowledge是不可以与learn搭配的,只能与acquire,obtain,absorb,accumulate ,develop,advance,gain,broaden ,enlarge,impart,derive ,deepen, brush up, digest 等词搭配用。
② In July, they will take part in the final term examinations.
In July, they will take t he final term examinations.
“examination”或“test”不可以与“take part in”搭配用,但可以和attend, have, sit for
,conduct, enter for, get through, pass, fail等词汇用在一块。
3、用词累赘
因为对某些词和词组的意思缺少真的的理解或把要表达的意思先用中文想好,然后逐字翻译成英语,导致累赘。比如:
① In my opinion, I think t he production and sale of fake commodities should be
banned.
I think t he production and sale of fake commodities should be banned.
in my opinion与I think意思一模一样,可以删去其中的一个。
② Scientists are trying to find a solution to solve t he problem of energy shortage .
Scientist s are trying to find a solution to t he problem of energy shortage.
一个词与它的派生词一块出现,导致意思重复,给人以累赘的感觉,改正后的句子变得简洁多了。
③ Waste gas is t he main cause which leads to air pollution .
Waste gas is t he main cause of air pollution.
cause和lead to都表缘由,同时用导致意思重复。
4、逗号连接错误
中国学生在英语写作中常常单独用逗号而不需要句号、分号、冒号或连结词来连接两个或几个独立的分句。比如:
① The weather was fine, we decided to climb t he mountain.
As the weather was fine, we decided to climb t he mountain.
② The [wv]prospects[/vw] are bright, the road has twists and turns.
While t he prospects are bright, the road has twists and turns.
上面两个标有误的句子在语法上没错误,它错就错在逗号的用法不当。错误的根源是学生受汉语写作习惯的影响,把汉语逗号有哪些用途等同于英语逗号有哪些用途。在汉语中,逗号可以单独用在并列分句之间。
变成两个简单句:
The wind was blow ing very hard. They couldn’t go boating on t he lake.
变成并列句,用逗号加并列连接:
The wind was blowing very hard they couldn’t go boating on t he lake.
变成并列句,用分号连接:
The wind was blowing very hard; couldn’t go boating on t he lake.
变成并列句,用分号加连接性副连接:
The wind was blowing very hard ,therefore, they couldn’t go boating on lake.
变成并列句,有时也可以用冒接,这个时候第二个分句讲解说明第一个分句
They couldn’t go boating on the lake; the wind was blowing very hard.
变成复合句:
As the wind was blowing very hard they couldn’t go boating on t he lake.
用独立主格结构改写句子:
The wind blowing very hard, they couldn’t go boating on t he lake.
看了以上什么时间雅思写作高分方法,假如大伙在词语和语法有肯定累积的基础上,再防止出现中式英语的东西,加上看法的正确性,我想那些基础差的考生想拿到雅思写作六分,应该可以如愿以偿的。最后祝愿大伙在新的一年里,可以顺利通过雅考虑试,拿到心中的分数。
雅思写作高分方法
Background 办法介绍
笔者就从教来的总结总结来介绍Background的写作,觉得应该从内容同句型上同时做到补充。下面先给大伙介绍下扩充背景句的办法:
1).追根溯源法。即从题目给出的话题中找出这个现象产生是什么原因来扩展背景句。这种办法合适大部分的话题,考生要尽可能在考试前做训练,如此在考试就能无往不利了。
请看下面的例子:
There are social,medical and technical problems associated with the use ofmobile phones. What forms do they take?Do you agree that the problems outweighthe benefits of mobile phones?
这个题目中给出的话题是mobilephone,所以考生可以从它产生是什么原因来考虑,就是科技的兴盛,而科技的兴盛,手机的广泛用是在20世纪末,如此背景句就有内容可写了。当然要通过相应的句型来写了。如… witnessed …
这个背景句就能写成:The late 20th century witnessed the boom of science andtechnology,which gave rise to a series of technological innovations,includingthe mobile phone.
再看一例:
Nowadays, some universities offer students skills that assist them to findemployment,but some people believe that the main function of a university shouldbide students with access to knowledge for its sake. What is your opinion?
这个问题需要讨论大学是提供职业技能或常识。从传统的角度来看,大学是传授常识的场合,为何教的技能,所以这里的考生也觉得通过努力和彻底的搜索办法找到,大家当然可以觉得是由于工作已经成为当今教育的目的之一,不少大学教授方法。当然,它是依据句式,可以用来引导缘由状语从句。
参考:As job-hunting has become one of the main purposes of universityeducation,the majority of the universities tend to offer vocational trainings TOPrepare the students for their future career.
2). 重述法。即对关于这个话题的目前近况的重述。
请看一例:
Nowadays,people are facing more and more work-related stress. State thepossible reasons for this phenomenon and make some recommendations about how tocombat it。
本题的话题关于重压,那考生可从目前社会现象来考虑这个问题,考生不难想出当下对重压这一现象的状况,即不少人都在承受着多少的重压。可用it isgenerally believed that … 形式主语的句型。
参考:It is generally believed that white-collar as well as blue-collarsworkers are suffering from psychological and physical stress stemming fromwork.
3).概念法。即通过对话题词的概念的介绍,这种办法有肯定困难程度,考生需要有渊博的常识,才能做到对名词的讲解,但对特别明显的词汇,考生可借鉴这种办法。
请看一例:
The main purpose of public libraries is to provide books should not wastetheir limited resources and space on providing expensive hi-tech media such ascomputer software,videos and DVDs. To what extent do you agree or disagree withthis statement?
Background 句型介绍:
从以上的剖析,大家发目前内容上是有办法了,不难从内容上找材料,可是假如句型积累不多的话,写出来的句子也是没办法得到高分的,所以下面,为大伙介绍下常见的高分句型。
1). It is generally believed
It is the case that …
It is apparent that … 等形式主语
Eg It is generally believed that white-collar as well as blue-collarworkers are suffering from psychological and physical stress stemming fromwork.
2). It is … that …
It is … who … 强调句型
Eg.It is the traditions in Beijing that attract many foreign tourists.
下面是考官范本里的句子:
It is the interaction of the two that shapes a person's personality anddictates how that personality develops.
3). 时间引导的叙述句型
Lately,the problem of unemployment has been brought to popular attentionthat governments at all levels place it on the agenda as the first matter.
4). 状语前置
下面是剑6的高分范本中的句子:
In spite of this,the obvious benefits of computer skills for young childrencannot be denied.
Just like movie stars,they live extravagant lifestyles with huge houses andcars.