大学习英语四级作文是衡量学生英语综合水平和应用能力的一个要紧指标，只有多练才能在考试中写出一篇好的英语文章。下面是我们为大伙收拾的2023年12月英语四级作文赏析（18），大伙可以作为学习的参考。
2023年12月英语四级作文赏析（18）
1 Encouragement Can Work Miracles
2 Someone said that encouragement is simply reminding a person
3 of the “shoulders” he’s standing on,
4 the heritage he’s been given.
5 That’s what happened when a young man,
6 the son of a star baseball player,
7 was drafted by one of the minor-league teams.
8 Hard as he tried,
9 his first season was disappointing,
10 and by midseason he expected to be released any day.
11 The coaches were bewildered by his failure
12 because he possessed all the characteristics of a superb athlete,
13 but he couldn’t seem to incorporate those advantages
14 into a coordinated effort.
15 He seemed to have become disconnected from his potential.
16 His future seemed darkest one day
17 when he had already stuck out his first time at bat.
18 Then he stepped up to the batter’s box again
19 and quickly ran up two strikes.
20 The catcher called a time-out
21 and ran to the pitcher’s mound for a conference.
22 While they were busy, the umpire,
23 standing behind the plate,
24 spoke casually to the boy.
25 Then play resumed, the next pitch was thrown —
26 and the young man knocked it out of the park.
27 That was the turning point.
28 From then on, he played the game with a new confidence and power
29 that quickly drew the attention of the parent team,
30 and he was called up to the majors.
31 On the day he was leaving for the city,
32 one of his coaches asked him what had caused such a turnaround.
33 The young man replied that it was the encouraging remark
34 the umpire had made that day
35 when his baseball career had seemed doomed.
36 “He told me I reminded him of all the times
37 he had stood behind my dad in the batter’s box,”
38 the boy explained.
39 “He said I was holding the bat just the way Dad had held it.
40 And he told me,
41 ‘I can see his genes in you;
42 you have your father’s arms.
43 After that, whenever I swung the bat,
44 I just imagined I was using Dad’s arms instead of my own.”
以上是新东方在线英语四级频道我们为大伙带来的2023年12月英语四级作文赏析（18），期望考生们都能备考顺利，获得出色的成绩!
